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Paragraph and
Sentence Strategy:
Moving From Known (Old) Information to Unknown (New)
Information
Any piece of writing, no matter what its topic is,
owes a great deal to history. Without knowing the
history of something, it is difficult for a reader to
comprehend its present or future conditions. Readers can
better understand where a writer is going if they first
know where they’ve been.
It is important, therefore, for the writer to establish
the known, or old, material first. Afterward, he or she
can move on to the unknown, or new, information without
the fear of puzzling his or her readers.
Establishing the Known:
Let’s look at an example: It is black and white, and it
circulates daily.
What is “it”? Some savvy readers may have inferred that
the sentence above may be discussing a local newspaper.
However, not all readers may have clearly understood
what “it” is. To rule out any chance of confusion, a
writer needs to make the known information apparent
early in the sentence, and then he or she may proceed
with the new information.
The Anytown Gazette, a local newspaper, is black and
white, and it circulates daily.
The revised example above gives the reader plenty of
information early on. The writer can then continue to
write about the newspaper in subsequent sentences by
referencing what is now known information.
Next, let's look at three strategies that you can use to move from
known (old) information to unknown (new) information:
- Strategy
1—Using Pronouns to Refer to the Known
- Strategy
2—Using Repetition of the Topic to Refer to the
Known
- Strategy
3—Using the Known to Link to the Preceding Sentences
Here is a list of questions that you can ask
yourself to ensure that you are using this strategy
as effectively as possible:
- Is the topic, or known information,
introduced early enough in the paragraph?
- Does each sentence in the paragraph point
back to the known information in a manner that
will be clear to the reader?
- Does each sentence in the paragraph put
forward the new information only after the known
information has been clarified?
- Does the paragraph stay on topic from
beginning to end without putting too much
emphasis on either the known information or the
new information?
Continue to
exercise 1 to test your understanding of this handout.
Copyright 2006 by the Academic Center and the
University of Houston-Victoria.
Created 2006 by Kelli Trungale.
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