Grammatically Correct 4/15/08
A weekly grammar tip created by Academic Center Peer Writing Tutors.
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Celebrate Poetry Month: Write a Haiku

The Author

Karalyn Jones
is pursuing a degree in education and has tutored since 2005. Karalyn is CRLA certified at the master level and is known in the Academic Center for the number of cups of coffee she can drink.  She also leads Make A Change, which is a movement to make changes in our daily lives that affect the world.

 

Definitions

Haiku (n):

A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
 

-American Heritage Dictionary

Today is National Carry a Poem in Your Pocket Day, part of National Poetry Month.  Celebrate by writing a haiku.

The haiku form comes from Japanese poetry. The word haiku originally referred to the introductory stanza of a poem (Toyomasu, 2001).  According to the Haiku Society of America (2004), traditional haikus were three lines, following a pattern of 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the second, and 5 on the third. The Society further states that traditional haikus conveyed imagery from nature and contained contain a word that indicated a specific season.

The modern haiku is a 3 line, unrhymed poem following the same 5-7-5 syllable pattern or a 3-5-3 syllable pattern.  There also tends to be a sharp contrast in the imagery of the poem, either between the first two lines and the third line or the first line and the last two lines. The modern haiku is not limited to a focus on nature only; modern haikus convey a wide range of messages and imagery.

Because the haiku format is limited in length, expressing an action or story can be near impossible. Emotions or concepts are easier to conform to the pattern. Also note that haikus do not usually have titles or ending punctuation.

Here are some examples:

behold the ego
set in glowing emptiness
on the edge of time

- Noel Kaufmann

   

The flap of a bat,
drip drip of monsoon waters.
Ancient image stares.

-Phil Wahl

And, Academic Center employees also wrote some haikus this month:

nothing shouts like the
ever falling white of pure
snowflakes on dark fields

-Karalyn Jones

       

Harshness in a cold
Cries out with despair and pain
As spring now ascends.

-Katie Moody

     

Is it dark in here
Because I can still see you
Lights on I can’t see

-Marcus Taylor

     

Flowers on the grave
Fireflies dancing all night
Melancholy Joy

-Nick Jobe

    

the written remnants
of you hold my heart. with tears
I embrace them all

-Summer Leibensperger

 

References

Haiku Society of America. Official definitions of haiku and related terms. Retrieved 29 August 29, 2007.

Toyomasu, K. (2001). Haiku for people. Retrieved August 22, 2007 from Toyomasu.com
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Quotes about Poetry

Poetry: the best words in the best order.
~Samuel Taylor Coleridge

Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words.
~Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
~Thomas Gray
 
 


 

Suggested Resources

Related Academic Center Resources

Previous special issues of Grammatically Correct have discussed writing sonnets (by Kelli Trungale; sent on 4/21/06 ) and writing limericks (by Trish Wayne; sent on 3/16/06).

Recommended Website of the Week

The Haiku Society of America has been around since 1868, holding meeting, lectures, workshops, readings, and concerts. They also publish a journal containing the work of their members. Their website offers archives of and activities involving haikus as well as the evolution of the haiku.

 

 

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