Grammatically Correct 4/1/08
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Celebrate Poetry Month: Write a Villanelle

The Author

Karalyn Jones
is pursuing a degree in education and has tutored since 2005. Karalyn is CRLA certified at the master level and is known in the Academic Center for the number of cups of coffee she can drink.  She also leads Make A Change, which is a movement to make changes in our daily lives that affect the world.

 

Definitions

Villanelle (n)

five 3-lined stanzas and a final quatrain, with only two rhymes throughout, usually of pastoral or lyric nature

 

 

 

April 17 is Carry a Poem in Your Pocket Day.  

Find out more at Poets.org.

 

April is National Poetry Month, the goal of which is to "achieve an increase in the visibility, presence, and accessibility of poetry in our culture" (Poets.org). Although Grammatically Correct generally focuses on grammar (and style to a lesser extent), we agree with Paul Engle that, "poetry is ordinary language raised to the N th power."  Poetry helps reminds us that language has rhythm, cadence, and beauty, so we challenge you to write a poem this month, and this issue of Grammatically Correct provides direction on how to write a villanelle.

According to Encyclopedia Britannica (2007), the word villanelle comes from an Italian word meaning peasant and referred to a rural ballad (para 1). It further states that as a poem, the form first appeared in French poetry.

The modern villanelle is a 19 line poem: 5 three-line stanzas and 1 four-line stanza.

What makes the villanelle unique is its repetition: the first and third lines of the first stanza are alternately repeated as the last line of the next four stanzas and as the last two lines of the last stanza.

As for rhyme, the villanelle follows this pattern: aba, aba, aba, aba, abaa.

line 1 - a
line 2 - b
line 3 - a

line 4 - a
line 5 - b
line 6 - a  (Repeat line 1)

line 7 - a
line 8 - b
line 9 - a  (Repeat line 2)

line 10 - a
line 11 - b
line 12 - a  (Repeat line 1)

line 13 - a
line 14 - b
line 15 - a  (Repeat line 2)

line 16 - a
line 17 - b
line 18 - a  (Repeat line 1)
line 19 - a  (Repeat line 2)

A classic and popular villanelle is "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas. Note the repetition and rhyming.

Line 1 Do not go gentle into that good night, (a)                      
Line 2 Old age should burn and rave at close of day; (b)           
Line 3 Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (a)                    

Line 4 Though wise men at their end know dark is right, (a)      
Line 5 Because their words had forked no lightning they (b)     
Line 6 Do not go gentle into that good night, (a)

Line 7 Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright (a)         
Line 8 Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, (b)  
Line 9 Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (a)                    

Line 10 Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, (a)     
Line 11 And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, (b)
Line 12 Do not go gentle into that good night, (a)

Line 13 Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight (a)
Line 14 Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, (b)      
Line 15 Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (a)

Line 16 And you, my father, there on the sad height, (a)           
Line 17 Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. (b)
Line 18 Do not go gentle into that good night, (a)
Line 19 Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (a)

References

Villanelle.  Retrieved  August 30 2007, from Encyclopedia Britannica..


Villanelle. Online Etymology Dictionary. Retrieved August 30 2007, from Dictionary.com.

 

Quotes about Poetry

Poetry: the best words in the best order.
~Samuel Taylor Coleridge

Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words.
~Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
~Thomas Gray
 
 


 

Suggested Resources

Related Academic Center Resources

Previous special issues of Grammatically Correct have discussed writing sonnets (by Kelli Trungale; sent on 4/21/06 ) and writing limericks (by Trish Wayne; sent on 3/16/06).

Recommended Website of the Week

Damon McLaughlin, previously a co-teacher of Craft in Poetry at the University of Northern Iowa, helped create Craft of Poetry about the different forms and elements of poetry. His page on villanelles is particularly interesting.

 

Grammatically Correct is a grammar tip of the week created by Academic Center Peer Writing Tutors at the University of Houston-Victoria in Victoria, Texas.

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